This was...God, heartbreaking and beautiful. I can see so much of the older Neal in this brief glimpse, his romantic side yet developing but still there; his ability to lie starting, even though he isn't aware that is what it will be yet. And his utter feeling of betrayal, so wrenching and real! This was a fantastic piece. And here ends my rambling.
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Date: 2012-10-04 12:15 am (UTC)